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*Jou,Jour, Jou’re is Shirleys French accent warping the words a little
*`plexed. Plexed is a word I use whenever I am frustrated or feeling strong negative emotions like perplexed or complexes
PLEASE READ ME Well, how was that for you. Over 9000 words. I decided an extra long chapter would be nice mainly because I haven’t updated Each Mark yet....I have writer Writers scene block for Part one of the wedding fiasco chapter. Well that and I just kept adding and adding and adding to this because I thought it was too short. Yes I know I make Snotlout to be the worlds person with the gay rumors, the insults, the attempted rape...RAPE IS NOT FUNNY PEOPLE NOT EVEN TO JOKE ABOUT! I was actually uncomfortable writing that scene but it is a key scene for future scenes and chapter. But to let you know, Snotlout was actually going there to apologize, beg and grovel to Astrid because he wasn’t in his right mind last night. This rape thing doesn’t get around the school at first until Camicazi feels she has no use for Snotlout anymore. He is literally being used as a puppet. OKAY onto something else. The scene about Hiccups leg. I read this medical case where this mans bone below the kneecap was shattered. Like splintered off and stuck out of his leg and stuff. Instead of taking the leg off the guy agreed to an experimental procedure to replace the bone with a substitute bone. When he recovered he could walk again but the problem was the metal they used in the stabilizing rods was reacting to his blood and slowly poisoning him without him even knowing. All he knew was that after four months his leg spike up in pain. The guy died. In this story Hiccup does not die or have blood poisoning O_O It just fucking hurt...think about you have a fake fucking bone in your leg with metal in there too....it is gonna hurt. Man I’m writing alot here but I’m not done. The thing with Hiccups sudden personality change is a result of the accident several years ago and the girl who jumped in front of two cars to save him. I get kind of paranormal fantasy with this but it wouldn’t be me. You actually know her too~ By the way I’m sorry for not providing a translation to what Shirley is saying in French. I wrote those yesterday and when I used google translate (My friend wrote me the French speaking parts) it totally fucked it up! Okay last thing....What do you think of...OWEN My blonde spike haired warrior hacker guy with the icy blue eyes~
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loved this! i hope there is another chapter.